Hi Shad! Huge topic right now! Here is my critique: Define why we are at war in the beginning. Maybe add some discriptions of the pics that you have incorporated. Fix mis-spellings..."Uregent". Some bullets are not working in places and I would add some line-breaks to seperate ideas/info. Maybe make the ending feel more like an ending...A good quote that you feel sums up your feelings would be fantastic. Have a good summer!!

Hi Shad,
I thought your Wiki was really good. Bobby had some good comments. Because I am pretty familiar with your topic, I have a few questions for you. On your page, you have "war is aimed at repelling aggression & stopping massive human rights abuses". I was just wondering if Saddam's killing 1/4 of a million of his own people in order to keep them under control, oppressed and/or because they didn't agree with him would constitute as aggression and massive human rights abuses? Also, if the majority of the civilians in Iraq are glad we are there and are glad that we took Saddam out of power and if Iraq is now our ally, would that still mean that we went to war with Iraq? or would that mean that we went to war with the terrorists that were in Iraq and we have now set them free? Your page was a very interesting read though and I thought that you made some really good points. I thought the pictures really brought your page to life. Good job!

You bring out a lot of good facts that would justify those who accuse bush of having false intentions for invading Iraq. Lots of interesting figures with the various accusations. We did what we had to do over there to get Saddam out of power. The man was a tyrant and his two sons were even worse than he was. I still support the war, and I was there.

I'd have to say your presentation is good, well organized, and comprehensive. Good job at organizing your thoughts and putting this together. I was surprised how much information you included, maybe a little too much. Good job though, the war is a difficult issue.