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Berenice Essay 2

Page history last edited by PBworks 17 years, 7 months ago

Vacation

In order to go on a vacation, people have to go through some basic steps that can help them be prepared for a vacation. First, choose the place that’s going to be visited. Second, search around to find an affordable hotel and plane or bus tickets,or rent a car. After the search is completed, choose the hotel that’s the best and the best way to travel. Then call the hotel to make reservations. Make sure to call ahead of time, or it can be really hard to reserve a room. Trust me, I have gone through that, and it can be a real pain in the butt. When that’s done, the packing can begin, but make sure to pack everything needed. One time I forgot to pack my sunscreen and I came back with a real bad sunburn. When everything is packed, the vacation is ready to go! Well, these were some basic steps to fallow to be prepared for vacation trip. Good luck!

Comments (2)

Anonymous said

at 12:17 pm on Dec 5, 2006

You have a lot of little errors here and there. Try to clean it up. Commas, no end punctuation, verb agreement, etc.

Anonymous said

at 12:17 pm on Dec 5, 2006

Oh, and a run on sentence, too!

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