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Berenice Essay 3

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When a person starts college, i wonder if it changes any thing in their life like it did mine. Starting college did change a few things in my life. The changes are not drastic changes, they are little changes. Before I decided to start college, my every day life was a little different. There are three things that noticeable to me. I have less time to sleep, I bought a computer, and now I spend less time at home.

The first thing college changed in my life is the time I have to sleep. I noticed that now I only sleep about four, five hours or less. The reason for my lack of sleeping is ; homework! The best and usual time I have for homework is during night. I usually stay up till like two or three in the morning, as soon as I am done I go to sleep. But I also have to wake up early. So, school really cut down my hours of sleep.

Another thing that changed in my life is that I was motivated to buy a computer. Before I decided to go to college, I really never thought of owning a computer. When I decided to start college, I thought it would be a good idea to buy a computer. Seeing others experience, like my cousins, I saw that a computer is very handy for college. So, I bought one. It has been really useful to me, not only for school but also for my own personal need. Starting school again made want to by a computer.

Finally, the last thing that was changed in my life is the lack of time I spend at home. Since I started college I spend very little time at home because I also have to work. My usual schedule is; wake up around eight a.m., take a shower, get ready, eat, do some chores, around 12:40 p.m. leave to school, from school to work, then I get home around eleven or twelve. So, I am just about gone the whole day. Before I had more time at home. When I don’t work I still have to go to school, also there is always some where I have to go. Since I started going to college, my time at home really reduced.

Deciding to start school again, switched a few things in my life. First , I started having less time to sleep. Second, I decided to by a computer. Last but not least, I have less time to spend at home. If starting college changed a few things in my life, I wonder what my career is going to do for me, i wonder how many changes it will make. What ever they are I am looking forward to them.

Comments (2)

Anonymous said

at 12:18 pm on Dec 5, 2006

You need to space in between the paragraphs so I can tell where one paragraph begins and ends. Also, you need more support in the body paragraphs give more details. Improve your motivator and clincher.

Anonymous said

at 12:27 pm on Dec 5, 2006

Work on your motivator to eliminate use of the 2nd person (you). Expand it a bit.

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